I read your essay and i think your summary needs little bit more work as it doesn’t tell what was the decision that Patrick made at the end and his feelings about it. You didn’t talk about all the people who followed consequentialistm in the movie you missed Remy’s partner and Angie. I agree with the Patrick part but unclear about “Patrick believes it is a wrongfully thought for such people to commit it” would he agree if it was done by someone else? and also your essay is missing what message is the movie conveying or what was the idea that the movie tried to portray or depict.
Your feedback on Helen's essay addresses all the parts of the assignment. But as she did not discuss whether the movie takes sides- does it follow consequentialism or ethical absolutism- why didn't you offer your opinion as to which philosophy is the dominant one in the movie?
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